Tuesday, 10 November 2009

Some people perfer to be a man . However, others think that being a woman is better.Personally, I believe that this conception has advantages and disadvantages.
In childhood, some people prefer a girl because girls doesn't enough time to take care of
her, but , on the other hand, others say they have both the same problems regarding childhood.

In general, girls are friendly and quiet at schools more than boys because girls has ability to stay
and wait a lot of time. Nonetheless, the relationship between girls and boys are curcial in order to help of them.

Finally, I totally agree with the statement " we always need a strong rlationships".

1 comment:

  1. Hi Mohammad

    Good use of vocabulary.

    Correct the following please:

    prefer a girl = prefer BEING a girl
    girls doesn't enough time to take care of = girls DON'T HAVE enough time..
    and quiet at schools more than boys because girls has ability to stay = and QUIETER THAN BOYS
    curcial in order to help of them. = CRUCIAL in order to help EACH OTHER
    rlationships".= RELATIONSHIP

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